my bio poem

Free Write

2008-10-26T19:07:00.000-07:00

Today i went to my boyfriend's house. At first we went to a fifteen practice which we are both coming out in. It was very fun, my boyfriend made everyone laugh because of his silliness. After we got the dash back to his house and we just chilled there for a while. There we were listening to music and he was telling me about what happened with his cousin and his girlfriend. After that we began watching tv until we both got hungry and decided to go eat at subway! There he bought me a sandwich and chips and of course for himself. After that his brother got tired of his psp so he asked us if we wanted to go with him to sell his psp at a new store figuroa called game doc. There he soled his psp along with some games. After it got dark so i decided to come home. That was pretty much how my day went [:

Devoeloping Your Character

2008-10-12T13:27:00.000-07:00

Bob is a homeless guy who lives in Yosemite park, Eagle Rock. He is despret to eat, so what ends up happening is that he goes to the tarsh cans and digs through the junk. The park rangers kick him out when he trys going to sleep and he has to sleep in the streets where its always cold and uncomfortable to sleep. It is very sad seeing him in this condition because it is disgusting and unsatisfying to eat. He has ripped short shorts navy blue, a muddy muscle shirt, which he uses to clean up his nose. This all started seven years ago on one sunny summer afternoon he was very in love with this lady who liked to drink alot!Before he use to be an average person who depended on himself rather than his peers. One day he went to starbucks and he couldn't help keeping his blue eyes off this humble lady. At first they began going out and soon they began getting deeper in love. He thought he was in love with this lady but it turned out that the lady was only with him for his money. Evetually she got him into drinking day and night, and would waste his money whenever she had the chance. Everyone told him not to trust her very much because she had a reputation of being a person who takes advantage of whenever she has the opportunity. He told his friends and family that they were all just jealouse and that he didn't need them in his life. So once he found out he was bankrupt and the bank wanted to take his home from him, thats when the lady decided to leave him. Now poor Bob is stuck in the streets with no one to care for him or show him love.

setting

2008-10-05T08:04:00.000-07:00

I feel wind blowing at my face. I feel my sweater warming my body. I feel my legs warmers warming my legs. I feel my hands very cold. I feel my hair blowing as the wind is blowing right at us. I see a lot of people. I see a child crying for his toy. I see my my friend talking to the store guy. I see food. I see the clock. I see a boy deciding what to get. I hear my friend talking. I hear the refrigerator. I hear music. I hear the child crying. I hear myself talking to my friend. I smell coffee. I smell my lip gloss. I smell my friend's perfume. I smell my hotdog my friend got for me. I smell ketchup. I taste the hotdog I'm eating. I taste the soda i got. I taste the coldness of my soda. I taste hotness of my hotdog. I taste my flaming hot chips.

"Response to Lyrics"

2008-09-28T09:53:00.000-07:00

"You Only Live Once"

Oooooh
Some people think they're always right
Others are quiet and uptight
Others they seem so very nice nice nice nice nice oh oh
Inside they might feel sad and wrong

Oh no
29 different attributes
And only 7 that you like, uh oh
20 ways to see the world, oh oh
Or 20 ways to start a fight

Oh, don't, don't, don't
Get up
I can't see the sunshine
I'll be waiting for you baby
'Cause I'm through
Sit me down
Shut me up
I'll calm down
And I'll get along with you

Ooooooo-ooooo-ooooooh
Oh, men don't notice what they got
Women think of that a lot
1000 ways to please your man oh oh
Not even one requires a plan. I know
Countless odd religions too
It doesn't matter which you choose
One stubborn way to turn your back
This I've tried, and now refuse

Oh don't don't don't
Get up
I can't see the sunshine
I'll be waiting for you, baby
'Cause I'm through
Sit me down
Shut me up
I'll calm down
And I'll get along with you

Alright..
Shut me up
Shut me up up up up up
And I'll get along with you...

i relate to this song because its very true of what he is talking about. This is because ill get along with anyone even if they are a stubborn person everyone deserves a chance. I also like the tittle of the song because its true we only get to live once and we should enjoy life for that... I think the singer was relating to his life because he might have been back stabbed in life and therefore he might have trouble getting along with anyone but he must take the chance and get along with that person or else he might be missing out on someone fun

Bio Poem

2008-09-22T12:50:00.000-07:00

Mary Paredes
child of Maria & Walter Paredes
who enjoys spending time with her friends
who hates being bored
who wants to make a difference in life
who wishes she can marry him <3
who is scared of clowns
who dreams of getting married him <3
who is determined to make others happy
who values close friends
who is proud of who she is
who graduated from college
who lives in Eagle Rock
Mary Paredes