Sunday, October 5, 2008
setting
I feel wind blowing at my face. I feel my sweater warming my body. I feel my legs warmers warming my legs. I feel my hands very cold. I feel my hair blowing as the wind is blowing right at us. I see a lot of people. I see a child crying for his toy. I see my my friend talking to the store guy. I see food. I see the clock. I see a boy deciding what to get. I hear my friend talking. I hear the refrigerator. I hear music. I hear the child crying. I hear myself talking to my friend. I smell coffee. I smell my lip gloss. I smell my friend's perfume. I smell my hotdog my friend got for me. I smell ketchup. I taste the hotdog I'm eating. I taste the soda i got. I taste the coldness of my soda. I taste hotness of my hotdog. I taste my flaming hot chips.
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Mary,
Good job. I think that some of your sentences good use a little more detail. I will give you full points, but please go back and add more detail.
-Mr. Ewing
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